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Re-Tread
Last time, Nate pulled out prematurely. (Of the Food Baron job, that is).
Today’s Comic
Now, it’s just time to tie up some loose ends.
Is that what Aya meant when she said to be careful up there?
Fun fact: this is one of the few scripts that survived mostly intact from the first version of this story. See the original here!
Transcript
(Nate getting out of the car and looking up)
Narration: Huh, she's up on the roof again. May as well go talk to her before I leave.
(Nate climbing up)
Nate: Hey.
Rose: Oh... Hi.
(Nate going to sit down with Rose)
Nate: Mind if I join you?
Rose: No, uh, wait!
(Nate sitting next to Rose)
Nate: I just figured I owed you an explanation, but I can leave, if you want.
Rose (cringing): That's not it. You're sitting in bird shit.
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